That Mossie looks good to me. There are a couple of things that could be improved but all in all a good build.
The tires are to black and shiny as well. Tyres look much more convincing in a very dark grey eventually dusted over with a bit lighter grey over the tread area to show wear.. They do need to be matt though.
The canopies on aircraft are also a focal point. Everyone will try to see "whats inside". There are some that can just take a fine brush and go at it and it looks great. Others (myself included) have not got the rock steady hand that requires so its masking tape and a sharp blade.
I have also experimented with
Decals for canopies. Clear inkjet decal paper, sprayed with acrylic paint then cut to the required width. After four or five years they are still holding down and look OK. A tad fiddly but if it goes wrong you just peel it off and try again! (and you can do the interior colour and exterior colour at the same time. Just spray the decal film with the inside colour first then the out side colour.