Si, Scottie, Richard, Dave - thank you one and all
Dave, wouldn't exactly call it a master class but if you can't see any glaring errors then I'm happy
Some further small updates.....
turret gun mounting rod that sits in the cone mount added from aluminium armature wire
before you all point out the mould line on the gun this is just a stunt double playing the part for test purposes
the text in the book says the gun mount could be raised and lowered but since the entire mechanism including the cone is missing from the reference vehicle I have no idea how - shall have to cobble some sort of winding wheel. Guess it would be on the right as the left would have had the large capacity magazine
stowage box locks added to door and front wing bins
radio aerial bracket added to turret
lock covers added to engine side access doors
jerrycan added to left upper hull
can is from the Minicraft set - features an etch flange that sits between the two side panels
trafficator housings have had etch support brackets added
looking at the reference pics it was clear that the kit tropical air filter was too small so I scratched a larger item
unfortunately all the pictures I have are rather indistinct when it comes to the detail
the caption states that the filter comprised felt circles in a tube so it is fair to assume air entered from the end so I punched out a 3mm circle of fine mesh and added it to the end of the tube
brackets are from bits of etch fret with hex bolt heads added from hex rod
a start made on an armature for first figure based on reference photo - boots are sliced from some dodgy old
Tamiya infantry with detail removed